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Rule (Marked Men, #1)

Rule (Marked Men, #1) - Jay Crownover 3.5 Stars!

Finally.. a New Adult story where I actually really LIKED the heroine!

Many other reviewers have summarized the plot so I'll just say it was a very enjoyable read despite the apparent lack of proofreading. I'm not very sensitive to that especially when I'm so into a story so for me to notice means it needs some work.

Also related to editing... I thought it could have been a little tighter of a read. There was quite a bit of narrative from both characters that could have been tweaked to smooth the flow. Not majorly because I didn't feel the author tipped over to tell vs show... just enough to pump up the pacing, the angst and to heighten the anticipation.

Will definitely be reading the next in the series.