Ummmm.... I honestly don't know what to say. I read her pirate book Damned and really liked it. This was just so under developed and choppy, the characters were inconsistent and unlikable, plot threads running crazy wild and manufactured angst with no real depth to support it found anywhere in the story. Sigh. The heroine was so incredibly immature I would have guessed her age to be 14 instead of 21. Shoot... some of the book's dialogue actually seemed like they were written by a 14 yr old! I forced myself to finish to the unbelievably dramatic (no really... Like "are you kiddin me with this unbelievable") cliffhanger ending. I don't think I'll be reading Book 2.
edited for comprehension.